Tuesday, January 14, 2020
Thursday, January 9, 2020
Setting and Plot Paras
Setting:
There are many water drops on blue background. Some of the water drops are big, bt some of them are small. A water drop is like a container that wraps an island. The island is surrounded by water. Most of the island is in the water, but part of it is still exposed. Above the island are green forests, flowery hills, and small white houses with red roofs. There seemed to be apple trees in the woods, and the grass next to them was full of flowers. There are many houses next to it that look like palaces.
Story:
There are many water drops on blue background. Some of the water drops are big, bt some of them are small. A water drop is like a container that wraps an island. The island is surrounded by water. Most of the island is in the water, but part of it is still exposed. Above the island are green forests, flowery hills, and small white houses with red roofs. There seemed to be apple trees in the woods, and the grass next to them was full of flowers. There are many houses next to it that look like palaces.
On an island, a prince lives, but this prince called himself the prince, because he lives here alone on the island, and he built his own palace by the woods next to it. One day, the prince was bored on the island and felt very lonely, so he wanted to explore the edge of the world and find out if this world has his kind. So he chopped a piece of wood, made a boat and a pair of oars, and went out for adventure.The prince strove hard to paddle. However, just when he felt that he was about to reach the edge of the world, he realized in horror that the world was destroyed. It turned out that his world was a drop of water, and after a long fall, it finally fell to the ground and shattered. In the sky, there are many similar raindrops, and they are also falling, just like countless same worlds, but in the end, they have not escaped the broken fate. Just like people in real life, the destruction of water droplets is like the destruction of people's dreams, and eventually it is broken into pieces and dropped to the ground.
Tuesday, January 7, 2020
Action Verbs
I ate chinese food
I slept in the hotel
I played video games
I travelled to Ningbo
I ran in the rain
I cut my hair
I read novels
I listened Mayday's music
I lost my phone
I cooked the food for myself
Ther's a island in the water drop.
It started to rain.
The water drop fall to the ground and the island is destoryed.
island houses forest hills waterdrops oceans
raining
no characters
blue green(trees) houses(red and white)
It started raining and there's an island in the water drop, and there are many water drops here.O(One water drop, one world)
The sound of the rain. wet (maybe heavy)
rainy
some of the water drops are small bt some of them are big.
I slept in the hotel
I played video games
I travelled to Ningbo
I ran in the rain
I cut my hair
I read novels
I listened Mayday's music
I lost my phone
I cooked the food for myself
Ther's a island in the water drop.
It started to rain.
The water drop fall to the ground and the island is destoryed.
island houses forest hills waterdrops oceans
raining
no characters
blue green(trees) houses(red and white)
It started raining and there's an island in the water drop, and there are many water drops here.O(One water drop, one world)
The sound of the rain. wet (maybe heavy)
rainy
some of the water drops are small bt some of them are big.
Tuesday, December 17, 2019
In class writing
1. What was your vision as a director/creator for this project?
2. What elements of the original story did you maintain in your project?
The part of Mrs. Mallard's thoughts that he fell into because he heard the death of her husband, and the part where she returned to see her husband alive and died of heart disease due to extreme excitement.
3. What did you change about the original story in your project? Mr. Mallard wanted to get rid of Mrs. Mallard, so he deliberately told his friends to ask them to help him play the drama of his death, so as to start his new life.
4. What is the twist or climax of your adaptation? People may think that Mr. Mallard and his wife are very loving, and they will not think about Mr. Mallard but want to get rid of his wife.
5. What is the strongest part of your project so far? Mr. Mallard decided to get rid of Mrs. Mallard's thoughts and actions.
6. What is the weakest part of your project so far? Mrs. Mallard's mental activity after learning that her husband is dead.
7. How has this project helped you learn about how stories work?
If you write a story, you must have a climax. Of course, if the plot is reversed, it will be more attractive. When you set the plot, you must consider how to explain to the reader how this happened and why.
8. How has this project helped you learn how theater works?
As a character in the play, I learned more about how the emotions of the characters should be expressed when shooting, and how to adjust to the best shooting angle.
I am as Mrs. Mallard's sister Josephine to present the entire story in turn from an onlooker's perspective.
3. What did you change about the original story in your project? Mr. Mallard wanted to get rid of Mrs. Mallard, so he deliberately told his friends to ask them to help him play the drama of his death, so as to start his new life.
4. What is the twist or climax of your adaptation? People may think that Mr. Mallard and his wife are very loving, and they will not think about Mr. Mallard but want to get rid of his wife.
5. What is the strongest part of your project so far? Mr. Mallard decided to get rid of Mrs. Mallard's thoughts and actions.
6. What is the weakest part of your project so far? Mrs. Mallard's mental activity after learning that her husband is dead.
7. How has this project helped you learn about how stories work?
If you write a story, you must have a climax. Of course, if the plot is reversed, it will be more attractive. When you set the plot, you must consider how to explain to the reader how this happened and why.
8. How has this project helped you learn how theater works?
As a character in the play, I learned more about how the emotions of the characters should be expressed when shooting, and how to adjust to the best shooting angle.
Sunday, December 15, 2019
Thursday, December 12, 2019
Create a modernized adaptation
Characters: Mrs. Mallard, Mr.Mallard and Mrs. Mallard's sister Josephine
Act I: Mrs. Mallard just learned that her husband is dead, her sister Josephine should stay beside her and look at her with anxiety
Act 2: Mrs. Mallard weeping in her sister's arms
Act 3: Mrs. Mallard gets up from her sister's arms and runs into her room
Act 4: Mrs. Mallard locks himself in the room, Josephine stays outside the door
Act 5: Mrs. Mallard lies on a chair and looks at the blue sky and white clouds (there should be text to show her inner thoughts)
Act 6: Mrs. Mallard begins to get extremely excited and laughs
Act 7: Mrs. Mallard's husband, Mr. Mallard is back, opening the door
Act 8: An autopsy report of Mrs. Mallard, which should write about death in extreme excitement
Act I: Mrs. Mallard just learned that her husband is dead, her sister Josephine should stay beside her and look at her with anxiety
Act 2: Mrs. Mallard weeping in her sister's arms
Act 3: Mrs. Mallard gets up from her sister's arms and runs into her room
Act 4: Mrs. Mallard locks himself in the room, Josephine stays outside the door
Act 5: Mrs. Mallard lies on a chair and looks at the blue sky and white clouds (there should be text to show her inner thoughts)
Act 6: Mrs. Mallard begins to get extremely excited and laughs
Act 7: Mrs. Mallard's husband, Mr. Mallard is back, opening the door
Act 8: An autopsy report of Mrs. Mallard, which should write about death in extreme excitement
Wednesday, December 4, 2019
modernize this story
I will replace the telegram inside with a mobile phone, or the news on TV, etc.
I will change the plot to make this ending more dramatic. For example, Mr. Mallard deliberately made his wife and friends think he was dead. He wanted to get rid of his wife long ago, but he never found a chance. Just taking this opportunity to get his wife's heart attack so he can start his new life
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