My final draft starts with the word ‘friends’. My whole core theme is to let people cherish friendships. To this end, I found a lot of background information about this song at the beginning. The song "see you again" is used to commemorate Paul. I even found a lot of "speed and passion" that series of films inside the material, I want to use this to better prove my essay, but it is a pity that I spent a lot of time to find those things, in the end can not be used, so this is for me is a big difficulty. I think my essay's second body paragraph is relatively weak, because my whole article has a point of view and cherishes friendship, so it will be harder to write . When i am writing the second paragraph of the body paragraph, I didn't think of it and just started to write it. If I have more time, I think I can still improve it, then add more analysis sentences and analyze the author's emotional statement to the second body paragraph.
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